Work In Progress (help)

[LeFresh]

I tend to think track submissions is for finished projects, so I'm posting this here.

http://soundcloud.com/jaybizzlefresh/cobbs-lq-demo-3/s-4J34V

I'm looking for suggestions/feedback; what do you guys think this track needs to be completed.

I'm leaning towards vocals, but I don't have not a clue who I'd get to go over this.

[blackfoxbb]

synths are cool
nice chill track as is, but I would work at drums if u want it more danceable.
maibe some build-up or variation at 0:46 and 1:15 to introduce the chorus. and more kicks.
maibe play with pitch of the chorus?

[LeFresh]

thanks for the tips,
I was thinking transition fills, a buildup would also be great.

[de.j.l]

I thought about the original nintendo console being glorified by the gods. That ray of light be shining on an old dusty console. Track , image art idea . Lyrics could flow in this easily. I can hear in my head a male vocal, telling a story, or uplifting quotes.