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LeFresh
05-27-2012, 12:12 PM
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-WIWPrxrnNn0/T8JpTtimhrI/AAAAAAAAAVc/7ynOhw_cV8I/s640/ondaflor2.jpg

Were gonna keep this black and white to save on printing cost.
Its got all the details but I feel it needs some imagery or something to make it pop.
I'd add a pic of the guest dj but he doesn't have any good pics.

Suggestions?

Marc S
05-27-2012, 02:53 PM
the align is all over the place, some is left, some is right, some is in the middle.

the typography looks a bit amateur too, look at different typefaces

LeFresh
05-28-2012, 08:54 AM
thanks for the tips!

Marc S
05-28-2012, 09:37 AM
post up your updates,

LeFresh
05-28-2012, 09:21 PM
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-FQeGYvOTet8/T8Q6LPq6BGI/AAAAAAAAAV0/N2vYMD05UgQ/s640/ondaflor2.jpg
So I made a few changes...
The last line looks out of place, but I don't know what to do with it it because of the logo.

Marc S
05-29-2012, 05:07 PM
does the flyer have to be that size? cant you make it a little longer? then you could maybe centralise that line and drop the logo down?

LeFresh
05-30-2012, 09:59 PM
Thats legal size. Already got it printed up, I'll keep that in mind for next time.
Thanks for the tips Marc!