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TheFrenchWay
02-15-2012, 09:58 PM
http://soundcloud.com/thefrenchway/thefrenchway-en-fran-ais


This is a House track I just finished.

I would like to get some feedback, advice and constructive comments. What ever is on your mind really.


Thanks.


(I hope i'm at the right place for this!) haha

Aron
02-16-2012, 02:47 AM
Track has potential. The main riff is fine but the high pitched one does not work.

The mix sounds very dry especially the vocal.

Cheers

de.j.l
02-16-2012, 07:13 AM
Track has potential. The main riff is fine but the high pitched one does not work.

The mix sounds very dry especially the vocal.

Cheers


Could you elaborate on how the high pitched riff doesn't work. Is that a personal thing to you because regardless of the key I could beg to differ on your statement.

I do agree with the vocal comment though, it could use some dampening. Get 'er as wet as ya can.

mainstreamdjs
02-16-2012, 11:05 AM
I have to say the same thing....I would take that high pitched riff and do something else with it, whether it be remove it or change it...It just doesnt seem like it belongs in the song to me.

TheFrenchWay
02-16-2012, 11:25 AM
I think I was trying to achieve a older électro sounding feeling with that high pitched noise but it seems to not have worked as well as I thought it would.

The vocals seems dry I agree.

I can now improve on those aspects.

Thanks for the comments! I appreciate it lots :)