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jsides
02-14-2012, 06:04 PM
here's my first demo I produced in ableton. I've only been producing for a little while so its not perfect but just wanted some feedback on what I've got so far.
http://soundcloud.com/jeremysides/burnin-it-up

Hygro
02-15-2012, 08:42 PM
Use soundcloud tags! embed that.

here is yours http://soundcloud.com/jeremysides/burnin-it-up

Your piece has wayyyy too much low end rumble and low-mid bass muddiness. You compensate for it by upping the gain on your percussion, making it unnecessarily way harsh.

The groove patterns are good, the arrangement is good. I liked the use of vocals in this one.

The speed up of hi hats at the end is nice. The track is about 2-4 minutes too long but if you redid the mix and mastering it might gel for longer.